Auld Lang Syne
Act I
It is a
cold night outside the somewhat populated superstore. The windows are covered
with Christmas decorations, the walls strewn about with lights. In front of the
store stands one dark figure in a worn grey hoodie and an empty can. She is
Alma, a teenage homeless girl. She takes a deep breath, hoping to get some
money for a warm meal or a place to stay the night. So far, even during the
time of selflessness and giving, she has wound up with nothing. Suddenly, a
large woman and her obnoxious child exit the superstore with bags full of gifts
in hand. Alma holds the can out with a warm, yet desperate, smile on her face. However,
the woman ignores Alma and walks over to a bell-ringer from the Salvation Army
who is standing down the sidewalk. The woman hands over a handful of cash and
places it in the already incredibly full bucket of money. Alma feels hurt and
is even more insulted when the woman’s child sticks his tongue out at Alma. The
woman and the kid walk by again, the kid knocking the can from Alma’s hand.
Alma picks up the can, almost throwing it, but sighs and lowers the can
instead. As she sighs, a cloud of smoke escapes her mouth. She shivers, pulls
the hood over her head, and figures she should leave the front of the store. She
won’t be getting any cash with that bell-ringer there.
Act II
We see a
quiet neighborhood. The houses are done up with flashing colorful lights, the
trees outside decorated with wonderfully expensive looking garlands, and front
yards are covered with fake inflatable snowmen and Santas. Alma walks down the
sidewalk, kicking her still empty can. It is getting late and still no one has
given her money. She stops, seeing a business man walking down the street with
a cigarette in his mouth. She goes and picks up the can, holding it out to him
as he passes by. The man walks by Alma and tosses the cigarette in her can. He
runs up his drive and enters his house, slamming the door behind him. Alma is
speechless, in shock. She shakes in anger, squeezing the can, and throws it to
the ground. In a fury she pulls down the Christmas lights from his house. They
pop off and explode, some burning out. She grabs some that are attached to a
tree outside his yard, but they are battery operated and not plugged in. She
pulls them from the tree, the tree breaking in half. She falls to the ground,
making her embarrassed and angrier. She sobs as she pulls the top half of the
tree and the lights attached to it down the street. She picks up her can and
walks down the sidewalk, quietly sobbing.
Act III
Alma
reaches a condemned building, the windows boarded up and tape around the door.
Still pulling the tree and lights, she grabs the base of the tree and smashes
the door down. Her heart is full of such sadness and anger, that she terrifies
a small child sitting in the building. Immediately she feels hurt as the kid
looks up at her with his wide scared eyes. She takes a breath, removing her
hoodie, and pulls in the tree and lights. She props up the tree against a wall,
twirling the lights around its branches, and sits down in front of it. She
takes off her hat, opening her arms to the small boy. He cautiously walks over
to her, finally sitting in her arms. She brushes her hair off behind her ear,
her face now free and open. They smile, happy even if it is only in this
moment. The lights on the tree blink as they hold each other as the snow softly
begins to fall outside.
Act I
Scene I: Alma is introduced. She is homeless and has no money. She is standing outside a superstore.
Scene II: Woman gives money to bell-ringer. Woman's child is rude to Alma.
Scene III: Alma leaves the front of the store.
Act II
Scene I: Alma is walking down sidewalk of neighborhood.
Scene II: Alma begs for money from businessman. Businessman tosses cigarette into her money can and runs inside his home.
Act I
Scene I: Alma is introduced. She is homeless and has no money. She is standing outside a superstore.
Scene II: Woman gives money to bell-ringer. Woman's child is rude to Alma.
Scene III: Alma leaves the front of the store.
Act II
Scene I: Alma is walking down sidewalk of neighborhood.
Scene II: Alma begs for money from businessman. Businessman tosses cigarette into her money can and runs inside his home.
Scene III: Alma explodes in anger and frustration, pulling down the man's Christmas lights and stealing his tree.
Scene IV: Alma drags lights and tree down sidewalk.
Scene IV: Alma drags lights and tree down sidewalk.
Act III:
Scene I: Alma breaks into condemned building. She scares child inside.
Scene II: Alma puts up tree and lights, offers small boy a hug.
Scene III: Alma and boy hold each other. Alma smiles.
Scene I: Alma breaks into condemned building. She scares child inside.
Scene II: Alma puts up tree and lights, offers small boy a hug.
Scene III: Alma and boy hold each other. Alma smiles.
Powerful. Lots of emotion, but most of it is internal. You demonstrate good understanding of the character. Think about how you can externalize how she is feeling. Might be nice to introduce the child earlier – if it can be done efficiently and pay off nicely again at the end. Second act is the oddest – her acquisition of the tree – seems almost random and maybe too easy. Reminds me a bit of Dan Akroyd’s character in Trading Paces when he is dressed as a Santa.
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